Monday, May 4, 2009

Rain Descriptions

We are learning to write descriptions about the rain. We had to use our senses to describe the rain. Here are some examples.


RAIN

The rain sounds like a thunderstorm on top of my roof. It tastes like water and ice. It looks like lots of gumdrops falling from the sky. It smells like lots of little cakes.


By Theo


RAIN

The rain looks like tears falling from the sky! The rain makes a splash when I jump in it. The rain tastes like fresh water. The rain smells like nothing. The rain feels like goo.

By Rachel


RAIN

The rain looks like my Dads crying. The rain goes pitter-patter on my roof. The rain feels like water tipped on me. The rain tastes like frost. The rain smells like water.

By Milly


RAIN

The rain sounds like a thunderstorm! When I went in the rain it feels frozen. The rain tastes like frozen water. The rain looks like tears. It smells like smoke.

By Thomas


RAIN

The rain feels like blobs of goo. The rain makes a plump sound on my roof. The rain looks like magic fairy drops. The rain tastes like silk on my tongue. The rain smells like fresh water.

By Evie


RAIN

The rain can sound like a thunderstorm on my roof. The rain looks like tears falling from the sky. It tastes like silk on my tongue. It feels like glitter on my skin.

By Orla


RAIN

The rain looks like little jellybeans. It feels wet on my skin. The rain is blue. The rain makes the streams. The rain is wet on my skin. The rain suddenly came then we ran to class.

By Connor


RAIN

The rain feels like little jellybeans. The rain looks like the real water from the tap. It tastes likes water from the rain from the clouds up in the sky. The rain feels like fresh water.

By Pra-wa


RAIN

Rain from the sky. It tastes like fresh water. Rain is little. It feels wet. The rain is noisy up in the clouds.

By James

1 comment:

  1. Wow . What great writing Room 2. You really used fantastic words. Keep it up.
    Mrs Chao

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