We are learning to (W.A.L.T.)
write a recount about a time we were brave
I was at Taupo. It all happened when I was on my scooter. I fell off my scooter, “ow”, I shouted. My blood was pouring down my knee. My Mum put a plaster on my knee. It hurt a little bit but it was a little bit better but in the morning it was all better. The next day I could take it off.
By Bridie
I went on a boat and I went on an island. I went up on a cliff and I jumped off it. I felt scared. I got to the bottom. I swam up on the boat and I didn’t cry. We went back in the boat. I was brave.
By Henry
I was with my Mum, Dad, Jazze and Maisie. I went up the stairs. Next I fell back down the stairs. Scratch, scratch, scratch, and scratch, bang, bang. I had loads of scratches. I cried only for a little while. I got no plasters. I was really brave.
By Noah
I was across the road. My brother was with me. He accidentally tripped my bike on me. I went to my Mum. I was very, very brave.
By Eliza
At the choir I tripped over in the mud. “Ow”, it hurt and it was bleeding. Someone picked me up. It was Brook. I went to Chilton Medical Room. After choir I told my Mum about it.
By Alice
When I was on the big playground I was playing with my fingers. Then there was a big gate. It fell on my leg. It fell on my right leg. I was with some girls and boys. I was in a wheel chair. I was brave.
By Kahu
I was in Christchurch and….”ow”, “ow”, “ow”. My knee, head and elbow were bleeding red blood. Mum had to pick me up. I was brave.
By Holly
I was at Leon's house playing inside. Then we thought we would play out side. We played on the tramp. Then Leon fell on the grass. Bang! Then I fell on Leon.
By Jasper
I was in McDonalds. I went in to the playground. Scratch! A nail hurt my back. Mum had to call an ambulance.
By Edward
When I was at home I was playing in the henhouse. I broke my arm. My Mum came running up. She was crying. She took me to the hospital. My arm was colourful because it had bruises.
By Georgie
Wednesday, June 9, 2010
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Ouch, you poor things, so many bumps and bruises.
ReplyDeletewow what a brave bunch you are Room 2!
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