We are learning to write character descriptions.
What I was looking for: Name of turtle, what the turtle looked like, a smilie, verb, WOW words, full stops and capital letters.
My pet turtle is called Clare. She has a purple and yellow shell. Clare moves like a snail. She likes to clap her flippers.
By Emily
My pet turtle is called Pra-wa. Pra-wa has a blue shell and a pink shell. She has two different blue colours.
One is dark blue. She moves like a running tiger. She sounds very noisy! Pra-wa likes to swim like people. She splashes!
By Pra-wa
My turtle is colourful. His name is Rainbow because he looks like a rainbow. He is small like Barbie. He has a smile on his face. He likes to swim.
By Sinead
My pet turtle is called Osarea. She is a Mum. Osarea moves slow in the water. Osarea looks like a rugby ball. Osarea makes splashes in the water.
By Milly
My pet turtle is called Bubble. She looks like a pink and green bubble. She shines like all the precious jewels. It twinkles and makes whirls in the water.
By Rachel
My pet turtle is called Hoho. My turtle Hoho looks very old. He is dark green and light green. When he is in his shell he looks like a stripy ball. Hoho makes a creaky noise when he is moving. Hoho likes to clap his hands when he is going to shuffle across the mud. I love Hoho!
By Evie
My pet turtle is called Max. He has a brown pattern on his shell. He’s fast like a cheetah! He sounds like he is blowing bubbles when he’s lying down. He swims then he rolls over to get to sleep.
By Thomas
My pet turtle is called Tiny Tom. He has a gold shell like a cheetah. It glides through the glimmery water. Swish he goes when it swims in the deep dark sea. When he glides he glides down to the bottom and he swims on the bottom.
By Ben
My pet turtle is called Phoebe. She looks like a doughnut. It is slow like the sea. When she is twirling and swirling she sounds like a very hungry turtle. She claps with excitement. She is so clever. I love her so much!
By Grace
My pet turtle is called James. His shell is green. He likes to swim in the sea. He makes a shhh sound like the sea.
By James
My turtles name is Crash Car. My turtle looks like a racecar because he has a number on him like a toy racing car. Crash is very slow like a snail. Crash Car sounds like a motor when he glides through the blue water. He’s fantastic at swimming.
By Tom
My pet turtle is called Clare. Clare has a green shell. She is a little turtle. She has a small shell. She moves like a snake.
By Orla
My pet turtle is called Rocket Croc because he rockets up out of water like a crocodile. He runs like a cheetah. Rocket Croc lands in the water.
By Luke
My pet turtle is called Dungeon. He looks like thunder and lightning.
By Theo
My pet turtle is called James. My turtle has blue on his shell. My turtle can swim really fast.
By George
My pet turtle is called Batcar. Sometimes he spins on his shell. He looks like a bowling ball. He looks like a bowling ball when he goes into his shell. He looks like he is square.
By Connor
My pet turtle is called Rascal. It looks like a king because he has brown hair. He has blue eyes. He moves like a snail. He makes a shshshshsh sound in the water. He likes to swim in the beautiful water.
By Lachlan
My turtle is Patrick. The turtle looks like a snail when he walks. He can run very fast like a cheetah.
By Renee
